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Fractured Mind by ~MzThorn:iconMzThorn:



At the heart of the darkness spins a cyclone of shattered glass. The individual shards, tossed by the greater storm, spin independently and at their own speed. Occasionally, a shard will slow enough to show the memory it contains:




...A figure made of black and green mist...




....Thorny running through a moon-lit garden full of glowing plants, her childlike laughter hauntingly out of place on the woman's lips...




...Christopher, lost in a spell, unaware of the growing burns on his hands as he etches a new blade...




...Fender, torn and bleeding, laughing at her success...




...A fist covered in swirling, flickering red lights smashing a mirror...




...A woman's thigh, the frost white flesh marred by a great wound closed with tiny stitches...




...Christopher, oblivious to all else, lost in a kiss with an unseen companion...




High up in the eye of the storm, Thorny spins, stretched on her toes with her arms above her, eyes closed. In the still blackness beneath her rests Christopher, watching and waiting for her to open her eyes.

©2009 ~MzThorn
:iconmzthorn:

Author's Comments

A peek inside the mind of one of my current RP characters.

Thorny and Christopher are mine. Fender hails from DWMSI of Valenth and belongs to herself.

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:iconcalifornicate:
*fangirls*

You know how brilliant I think you are. <33 Seeing this a little more polished is awesome.
:iconmzthorn:
*flails* *blushes*

Stop encouraging my muse!

I'll try to write more. I make no promises.
:iconwiebestavast:
I think your intro lines are written very well: I can "see" it when I read it. You've discribed it very detailed (which is good, I'd say)
:) So... Thorny is in sort of an emotional coma, and Christhoper stands by waiting for her to come out?
;)Or am I all wrong here?

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;) Het beste halen uit wat je hebt. Da's pas kunst!
;)Getting the most out of what you got. That's true art!
:iconmzthorn:
It's complicated. Christopher is an original character that has been floating around and demanding attention for about a year. Thorny attached herself to him (and stole my name) some what later.

Short version: Thorny's identity was completely suppressed and largely destroyed. Christopher's mind became intertwined with hers, his primal side emerging as her new personality. Her inner, sleeping self is slowly healing. When it wakes, the connection between them will be broken.
:iconwiebestavast:
:wow: Yahhhh, you're right, it IS complicated...
:P so.... Thorny wil awake with her own body and Christopher's mind? The 2 become 1?

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;) Het beste halen uit wat je hebt. Da's pas kunst!
;)Getting the most out of what you got. That's true art!
:iconmzthorn:
This is the inside of Thorny's mind, the part of her that is "her". Christopher is an observer because the conscious part of her is part of him. They're both conscious, but have a unique mental connection. Mostly, Thorny is really, really good at pushing Christopher's buttons because she's a physical embodiment everything he hates about himself.

Like I said, it's complicated. My muse has a warped sense of humour.
:iconwiebestavast:
:spin:
:wow:

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;) Het beste halen uit wat je hebt. Da's pas kunst!
;)Getting the most out of what you got. That's true art!

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